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I woke up suddenly, consumed by the darkness. Fearful tears flooding my eyes making it harder to focus on the only thing in the darkness. I drifted towards it...closer...it was a mirror! I looked at the tears staining my face deeply. My long, curly, brown hair shrouded my face. I looked at the fear echoing in my deep hazel eyes piercing my soul. I was pale although my skin is usually tan. Suddenly the mirror in front of me broke into many pieces flying at me cutting my skin as I began to fall the pain was too much. "HELP MEEEE!!!!!" I screamed as I fell further and further into the darkness...

I woke up suddenly I looked at my shaky hands...there was no more blood but somehow I still felt the deep pain. I looked around sitting up slowly to observe. I looked down at myself first noticing I wasn't wearing pants...I blushed at least I was wearing undergarments... I looked at the large purple shirt that said the word PINK in all caps. Colorblind shirt I thought as I tried to stand up on my shaky legs. At least my large shirt covered me about to my mid-thighs. I walked slowly, looking around at the mysterious room. I found a lantern on the ground next to a note. I figured the lantern would be useful when it gets a bit darker when my eyes shifted back to the note. I picked it up being cautious of anyone reading the letters:

Hello You are now lost in Amnesia. You will never get out little girl. Go ahead try you wont make it!!!!
The Barrels

I made an upset face "I'm not a little girl I AM A YOUNG ADULT IM 13!!! Another thing BARRELS I will make it out!!!" I growled but the information was helpful I thought well at least I know where I am now. I looked up at the rickety door breathing in deeply "I can do this." I told my self as I walked towards the door.I turned the cold knob readying myself for whatever there was to come. It was a long dark corridor I sighed "Just great..." I light my lantern and wandered down it being stealthy and careful not to make noise. I just hope Piggeh doesn't find me I thought back to my outfit. Until I noticed my necklace with the pocket watch like clock and a mysterious silver key. I shook my head "Focus Aradia." (pronounced: A-RAY-D-uh) When I got to the end I touched the cold knob and turned it slowly. I was relieved to hear it click open. Just as I was about to enter I was slammed into an old wall. Blood rushing from the back of my head. I winced at the pain but refused to show any fear. I faced the humanized Bro who had a wicked grin across his face. He whispered evilly "Hello little girl. What are you gonna do now." I felt the anger boil inside me "THIS!" I punched him in the face with a vengeance. He collapsed to the ground cursing under his breath before he disappeared. I was relieved he was gone but the pain in the back of my head suddenly hit me like a crashing wave. I threw myself harshly at the ground at the pain "AHHH!!!!" I felt tears coming but I forced them away, not wanting to deal with that right now. I touched the place where the pain flooded from. But when I brought my hand back it was soaked with blood. I thought about that amount of blood logically... I was losing a lot and I would need medical attention soon. I suddenly heard two gun shots from a room *BANG BANG* A figure burst out of the room Her black hair flying. I looked at her tense expression. Her cold grey eyes fixed on the thing she had just shot at. She was wearing a grey T-shirt and black jeans with matching combat boots.

"Jennifer?" I asked she was surprisingly skinny. She looked over at me with two pistols in her hand. I pleaded "Please help me.." She rushed over quickly "Are you okay uhm...who are you?" I responded quietly quickly fading out of consciousness "Aradia I am lost in Amnesia and I have been injured..." I couldn't finish my sentence I was growing to weak from loss of blood. She just lifted a bottle to my lips and commanded me "Drink this before you pass out Aradia." She tried out the sound of my name and seemed to like the way it ringed. I finally finished and gave out slipping back into the darkness which cradled me again...
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Yes this story is actually based on the real life me lost in Amnesia dont worry there will be other characters in it too :) I dont find myself to pretty but if you wanna know what I look like go here --> [link] just look at my deviant Id The bro looks like this --> [link] ((humanized))
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yey!! im not the only one who writes creepy stories like this!! i guess the fangirl ones are pretty similar then
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~CrazyCreativeQurl87 Mar 11, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Haha thanks I guess? :)
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~blackbutler207 Dec 13, 2012  Student General Artist
Aradia from homestuck?
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~CrazyCreativeQurl87 Dec 14, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
No thats my real name and what exactly is Homestuck?
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~blackbutler207 Dec 14, 2012  Student General Artist
homestuck is a really cool webcomic on mspaintadventures.com
you should read it, it's a little hard to follow at first but it's one of those things you just have to keep reading.
by the way, your name is really pretty! :)
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~CrazyCreativeQurl87 Dec 14, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Thank ya friend :D
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~blackbutler207 Dec 15, 2012  Student General Artist
you're welcome bro!
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~stephanosgirl Aug 19, 2012  Student General Artist
where did jennifer get a gun?
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~CrazyCreativeQurl87 Aug 19, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Who knows ask her
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